【写作模版】

　　(Date:)________

　　Dear,

　　①This letter comes to you from_______ . ②In it, some opinions are put forward for you to reflect upon.

　　③As you know, _______. ④But unfortunately, we don’t find__________ sometimes. ⑤For one thing,________________.⑥For another, _________.⑦what's more, _________.⑧Honestly speaking,_________. ⑨For example,_______.⑩And__________⑾But there is still much room for improvement.

　　⑿I do believe____________.

　　Sincerely yours,

　　(Signature:)

　　【模版要素】

　　①写信人姓名及身份

　　②写信目的

　　③主题词

　　④主题句

　　⑤问题1

　　⑥问题2

　　⑦问题3

　　⑧承认好的方面

　　⑨举例1

　　⑩举例2

　　11;复述观点

　　12;提出解决问题的愿望

　　【模版例文】

　　Complain about the Dining Service in School

　　January 6th , 2007

　　Dear Mr. President,

　　①This letter comes to you from one of your students. ②In it, some opinions are put forward for you to think about.

　　③As you know, students of us go to the dining-hall three times each day. ④But unfortunately, we don't find the service there satisfying sometimes. ⑤For one thing, the food is not nutritious as it should be. ⑥For another, the fare is a little higher than we can afford. ⑦ What's more, sometimes the staff in the dining-hall just bring us steamed bread with their bare hands and you can’t imagine how dirty they are!

　　⑧Honestly speaking, some measures have been taken and things are improving there. ⑨For example, IC cards have taken the place of money in the canteen. ⑩And the attitude of the staff is also changing a little bit. ⑾But there is still much room for improvement.

　　⑿I do believe that, with the efforts of all people concerned, we can solve the problems there and make it a better place our students.



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