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　　① It is well-known that_________ . ②For example,_____________.③And_________ . ④What's more,______________.⑤Even____________.

　　⑥However,_____________ . ⑦First of all,_______________.⑧Meanwhile, ________.⑨And_______________ .

　　⑩Therefore,____________________________.⑾In a word, _____________.⑿We should________________.

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　　① 提出主题或现象

　　② 举例1

　　③ 举例2

　　④ 举例3

　　⑤ 举例4

　　⑥ 主题词

　　⑦ 论证1

　　⑧ 论证2

　　⑨ 论证3

　　⑩ 小结上文，做好过渡

　　11; 总结全文

　　12; 强调主题论点

　　【模版例文】

　　Fight Against the Fake Commodities.

　　①It is well-known that with the development of economy, fake commodities prevail in many places of our country.②For example, fake medicines and fake diplomas are widespread all over the country.③And there are many reasons explaining this phenomenon, one of which is that some profiteers, regardless of people's interest, can’t wait to make a fortune; They just take risk making and selling fake commodities. ④What’s more, the punishment is not severe enough to stop the violators. ⑤Even the violators are not afraid of it.

　　⑥However, fake commodities are extremely harmful to consumers as well as to the whole society. ⑦First of all, fake commodities may cause losses to consumers. ⑧Meanwhile, fake commodities may harm people's health, sometimes even lives. ⑨And in the 1998 fatal alcohol poisoning case in Shanxi Province, for example, a peasant produced "alcohol", dreaming of becoming rich overnight; Which, with 27 people killed and about 700 poisoned, caused great sufferings to the victims and shocked the whole country as well.⑩Therefore, it is really high time we took measures to crack down on the production and sale of fake commodities.

　　⑾In a word, fake commodities are really harmful to everyone concerned. ⑿we should fight against the fake commodities.



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